Chalk Line Self

Will you critique a redo from me?
I felt as useless as spittle
In the corner of the mouth of life.
Expecting to be wiped away
By the handkerchief of chance.
I became a self cancer
A festering sore
Lacking any ooze of personable behavior.
I felt lonely.
I felt out of sync.
Like I didn’t belong
Didn’t deserve an invitation.
Hearing the SLAM! of all the world’s doors
Closed in unison
Inches from my face.
I was the dirt at the bottom of the well.
Where no water was drawn.
I carried my sorrows in a see through backpack
And hunched over from there weight.
I became sadness.
I fed on my sorrow.
I digested misery.
I was dying
My soul outlined in chalk.
My sense of self read: Police Line- Do Not Cross!
Yet that was before Eternal Love.
Now that is a redo! And a gem! The police line made the transition set up well.
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